Collateral Damage
©2013 by Barnaby Wilde
Farrukh adjusted
her niqab and studied the indifferent fruit piled on the market stall in front
of her. The fat stallholder halfheartedly flicked dust off the pomegranates and
oranges and wiped his hands on his grubby, grey kameez. She glanced at the
heavily creased shopping list in her hand. Her mother would be cross if she
bought poor quality, or paid too much.
Neither of them
noticed the dust cloud from the approaching truck.
Two soldiers
leaned on the wall next to the fruit stall, smoking and laughing loudly, rifles
slung nonchalantly across their shoulders.
"Are you
buying, or just looking?"
She bowed her
head with embarrassment at the stallholder's brusque interrogation.
There was a loud
squeal of tyres, a burst of gunfire and the cry of "Allahu
akbar" as the truck slammed the soldiers into the wall before the world
around her exploded with sound and light.
Farrukh's eyes flickered open momentarily as she lay
on the ground, a spreading pool of blood surrounding her head. She saw in the
distance, lying amongst the smoking debris and other scattered body parts, a
severed arm, still clutching a shopping list.
She felt no pain as her world went irreversibly black.
Slainte!
Powerful stuff!
ReplyDeleteEmbarrassment, impatience, light-heartedness, fear and finally horror are expertly communicated in few words - 200 to be exact.
Excellent, Barnaby.
Fantastic. Ta to all involved!
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